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Saturday, March 22, 2014

An Ocean of Peace

Hey, guys! BlackCat here!

To be honest I couldn't wait until today to post. Today I will post a snippet of writing that I call "An Ocean of Peace" Like I said before, please leave feedback in the comments. whether it's negative or positive, it helps me a lot! Here is "An Ocean of Peace"!

As the ocean's water's called to me I fell captive in it's spell. The lapping of the waves made me feel calm, and the sent of salt soothed my anxiety, for what was there to fear? My feet moved me from my spot among the rocks to the lip of the ocean, then to the depths of it. I let myself surrender to the peace to the peace of the water, then to it's torrent. I let myself sink to the bottom, for eternal peace awaited me.

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