Birds

Hi guys! I'm back with more writing stuff. Today i'm sharing a small piece of writing I call "Birds". And you'll have to read it to find out what it's about.
Anyway, I might make Saturday the day I post a new writing piece every week. Remember to leave feedback in the comments below!  Unless I'm busy on Saturday, I might post on the next available date. So keep that in mind. It would also be a help to suggest what you want to see next on my blog. weather it's my story, or poetry or whatever you want, just make sure you let me know! Also, if you're new to my blog, be sure to look at "An Ocean of Peace" down below!
Anyway, without further ado... Here is "Birds"

The fluttering of birds sounded above me as dozens of them filled the sky. To have wings, I wondered, must be a tremendous experience, to feel the rush of wind underneath me, and to fly over the clouds must be heaven. To have wings... to fly... to not have a care in the world. What a bird's life must be like.

An Ocean of Peace

Hey, guys! BlackCat here!

To be honest I couldn't wait until today to post. Today I will post a snippet of writing that I call "An Ocean of Peace" Like I said before, please leave feedback in the comments. whether it's negative or positive, it helps me a lot! Here is "An Ocean of Peace"!

As the ocean's water's called to me I fell captive in it's spell. The lapping of the waves made me feel calm, and the sent of salt soothed my anxiety, for what was there to fear? My feet moved me from my spot among the rocks to the lip of the ocean, then to the depths of it. I let myself surrender to the peace to the peace of the water, then to it's torrent. I let myself sink to the bottom, for eternal peace awaited me.

Getting Started

Hi everyone! I'm Black Cat!

Today I open my own blog. I want to open one so I can share my writing and earn feedback! I want to know what people think of my writing so I can improve and change it in any way possible. Every week starting this coming Saturday I will post a small snippet of writing I may write in my spare time. I may also ask for suggestions on the story I am currently writing called "Elven war". Don't be affraid to be honest with your feedback, I wont be offended.

Anyway, I am happy to get started! See you this Saturday!